ohhh my god honey this is SO good, fuck, you knocked this whole thing out of the park... the beginning with oikawa is so sickening and then daisuke busting in GLOWINGGGG is the greatest thing, i love that hes always Like This, precious miracle boy... aaaugh my favorite part of the whole thing is up in that first part, it’s this:

“ Ken always imagined Daisuke would taste like - ramen, cookies, chocolate, salt, the snacks he was always munching on when they played and hung out and studied together. But this Daisuke hadn’t eaten anything in hours, too busy chasing after Ken, single-minded devotion to Ken’s rescue, and that made him taste even sweeter.”

copied it as i read because i was so in love AHHH i love these details i love that he’s thought about it, i love DAISUKES DEVOTION!!! auggh!!! its perfect im glad it turned out to be a good sex dream

ken struggling with the aftermath is so so good, both the physical aspect of having to nurse his boner all day and how he keeps going back and forth between PLS DONT TOUCH and God Please Touch, you write his confliction so freaking well it’s just. flawless. and daisuke is so cute and curious and relaxed while ken is losing his mind... uggh the other part i loved most was of course, ken feeling dai’s heartbeat while they watched the movie and thinking about how there’s a place inside him for him??!?!! STOP KILLING ME IM ALREADY DEAD!!! fuck thats such a good line. and the ending is perfect, THE DRAMA of ken trying to run out before he even gets an answer, and the answer itself being just as perfect, A KISS!!!! god he likes you. he likes you so so much!!! daiken is eprfect